(The story that will change your life ^^ )
Every day, i wake up with a really tired body and heavy head ! after a long night of remembering old memories and thinking of people i haven’t met long time ago
It’s 12.00am , nothing special, this day is just like the past 6205 days …, so i just ley in bed, watch tv,eat and sleep . time is moving so slowly, the days are getting longer and longer, that hole in my soul is getting deeper and deeper..
Suddenly , While i was sleeping, i heard a noise as if a herd of elephants are coming toward me ,oh! it’s my young cousins and siblings
(i didn’t have an idea that these little souls came to wake me from my coma).
-My sister said : « wake up! wake up ! get ready .. »,
With a small cute mirror in her hand she started to style my hair , and when i looked to the mirror, i saw a young beautiful teenager , « ooh ! is that me ? » , » why do i look young? » these questions popped into my brain …
And a strange feeling broke into my heart ! it made me feel active and young ! it brought my life back to me !!!in that moment i realized that my journey didn’t end yet !! i have to Start to explore my Life,see every corner of the world, i want to see the sunrise, the sky and feel alive …! what.. what .. i was doing all this time !! ??
While these thoughts were rolling in my mind ! my family members came , each one is holding a gift, and my grandmom with a big b-day cake she said : » Happy 17th birthday, my dear ».
– i said with a loud voice : » yes!! i’m 17!17!.. i’m young ^^ »
♥ THE END ♥
thank you for reading !!
this short story is the condition of a lot of teenagers !
if you feel you’re old and you lived a lot ..
i’d be happy to open your eyes and tell you that you still young, there’s planty of fabulous things are waiting for you !! they’re waiting for you to chase them and make them yours, you need just to look in the mirror 😉
it is my first short story !! stay tuned for more stories ^^
i’ll be happy to receive your comments, opinions, advices 🙂
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Hello, I’m new here … I’ve read your topic, you have passion for writing and you know how to link scenes in a good way. I noticed some grammar mistakes just in case you wanted to be a pro anyway I really enjoyed it hmmm …. you are going to write about psycho stuff hahaha I’m reading them as soon as they’re published — keep it up we’re waiting
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Oow Thank u so much i really really appreciate your support ^^ THANKS … i’ll write more when i’ve free time ^^ stay tuuned !!
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